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Taste buds

as intuition thickened my throat
I left my voice in hollowed ground
while my tongue slithered in Maple pleasure.

Falling silent, I mumbled 'ecstasy' as my
shiny lips confessed, I bathed my taste buds in liquid Heaven...

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Prompt is:

Syrupy

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  • penman gold member
    March 6
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    March 6

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    A wonderful taster you have created in poetic enticement
    Best wishes and good luck to you
    Julie