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Dark Love

Spell bound a look at her own past,
Oh how sad it was when he walked away...
With no voice of sorrowful goodbye,
Just a smoke filled path to another world

Do I follow it or do I turn the other way,
Fight for my lover or leave for ever,
My heart aches for the one who left me
Cries out for him to come back,
Please come back my love,
Why do you do this to me?


I sit in my corner waiting to be saved
But of course you will be too late
For I am bleeding my last drops of life away
And you are nowhere to be found

Who is that in the darkness?
Someone is lighting the way
Trying to find me, trying to take me away
Will I let him, will you care

Oh his beautiful voice,
Telling me it’s going to be okay,
To just breathe and stay calm,
He calls out I love you my love don’t leave me yet
I whisper how can you love someone you know not of,
He calls back into the darkness that was invading me
You called for me in my darkest hour and now I’m here to pick you up.

He pulls the up into an embrace,
And I cry into his shoulder
What took you so long my love?

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