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No longer me

It so nice of you to break my heart, to tear it apart!             
Its so nice of you to show me the real you.
To show me what to do!               

I just don't care anymore! No no, not anymore! Not for you and not for me! I'm no longer the stranger that caught your eye, that made you sigh. I'm no longer that person cause i am no longer me!

So nice now that I'm alone, i don't feel out shone!
Its so nice of you to understand, my hearts made of glass!
So nice for you to walk away, you can just kiss my ass!
It was nice nice of you to set me up, just to watch me fall.
It was nice of you to never care, you never cared at all.
I understand what you did to me, what you thought so damn funny...

I just don't care anymore! No no, not anymore! Not for you and not for me! I'm no longer the stranger that caught your eye, that made you sigh. I'm no longer that person cause i am no longer me!!!

But thats ok, because i'm a different person today.
No longer the same stranger that caught your eye,
the one who made you sigh. 
Now i just wanna  cry, or maybe die.
I don't care anymore i don't want this pain inside!
So now my hearts for sale to lowest bidder i see.
I just don't care  anymore. No no, not anymore! Not for you, not for me!       
I just dont care anymore! No no, not anymore! Not for you and not for me! Im no longer the stranger that caught your eye, that made you sigh. I'm no longer that person cause i am no longer meeeee!!!

How was the ending. I feel It went kinda weak...

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  • movedon
    March 24

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    I liked it, but being yourself is the only way to be. a lot of emotion in this

    love
    mylee

  • first line, i sense sarcasm. a lot of emotion in this one, i can tell.