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Broken jigsaw




Perforations appear at seams stitched with aprehension
as thoughts of 'maybe' seem to dwindle into echoes of long gone,
sighs now made with glowing eyes
where once the grass was broken glass.

You have rescued this damsel waiting for her knight
with nothing more than Your caress and whispered words -
You have smeared acceptance over degenerated hatred;
i now stand proud on Your hand made of uncut crystal.

Shadows veer from blushes brought forward with a kiss,
always wanting to reclaim doubt and self loathing
but Your walls built with understanding and tolerance
protect simplistic views of self approval.

You have completed this dark jigsaw puzzle
made with scarred tissue and ripped dreams ...
i have found where i belong
and i love You more each day




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For the only Man who could ever have tamed me ... my Love, my Heart - Tattboy

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  • requiempoet gold member
    April 5

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    Broken and misused but someone comes up and picks up the pieces and gingerly puts the pieces back together with love and care. Don't ever doubt that you are beautiful and that you are loved...and i'm sure that your Owner tells you that every day! :-)


  • HaleyMary
    March 13

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    I missed your writes.

    I liked the part of shadows and doubt. It makes me think of how sometimes people may try to put on a mask and try to get people to doubt what they see. You're so talented at these dark writes, Chantell. Thanks for sharing and keep that pen flowing.

    Haley Mary


  • Selestial
    March 6

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    Beautiful

    You've written here about something that I have felt but have not be able to express. Wonderfully done! There is no doubt when reading this how you feel, and it's beautiful!


  • Tattboy silver member
    March 5

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    My darling.

    I don't have the words to say how wonderful this is.

    I love you more now then ever (even though I could not have believed that possible).


    • Tattboyspet
      March 6
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      sometimes i think to myself that You deserve so much more than what i can give You, but then i realize that all i can give You is myself and that You already have that!
      i love You so very much and i am so VERY lucky that You found me


  • Larissa85
    March 5

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    I read this 4 times and didn't quite understand it. Doesn't mean it is bad but I thought it was too complex (for my wee little brain to comprehend)

    • Tattboyspet
      March 5
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      lol - I have been knows to do a bit of my own 'abstract' most of the time, but I am glad to explain
      Basically, I was filled with self doubt and self hatred until I met my soulmate - He is the one who saved me from myself and has taught me acceptance of what and who i am with love and caring

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