I'd glady drink my tears for water
If only to live a while longer
I gladly go without a clue
On the hope of finding you
I'd sacrifice every daydream
Just to never pass you by.
I'd gladly drink my tears for water
And no longer be a deity's daughter
I'd gladly leave behind my home
Just so that I'm not alone
I'd believe whatever you say
If only you can let me stay
I'd serve these tears in crystal glass
My dreams upon a silver tray
Enjoy, my dear, the light repast
As I begin to fade away...
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good, bad, ugly? i'd say wonderful, i liked this very much, the rhyme well just made it fun to read, and the whole piece is just absolutely fantastic i feel like quoting everything, though it wasn't really what i was looking for from the prompt but still this is very good for me.. cause i can really relate, the last stanza is just beautiful!
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