You say I'm shallow...
Are you sure?
From my view, it seems that would be you.
Let's see... Hmm...
First, you wrote a poem about how you were in love with me.
Then, you said it was for some other girl.
Yeah, you're right...
That makes me shallow.
The only thing I did wrong was said no to you.
Looking back, I'm glad that I did.
This fight has gone on long enough yet you still insist.
Your new girlfriend thinks she's my best friend.
I'm done dealing with this whole thing.
It's been a waste of my time.
When you're finally ready to be a real man...
Someone can tell you where to find me.
Author notes
A former friend wrote me a message over MYSPACE telling me how shallow of a person I was because he was in love with me and how I hurt him because I said no. Then, his girlfriend started sending me messages and she told him that I was harassing HER. They're both pretty messed up. He's saying that I broke his heart and she's trying to be my best friend. It's a great situation... lol...
A contest entry
- Can this be happening? by ciara12.
1350 points, ended March 9, 18 entries
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Comments
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Amazing write I really know how you feel and I love the way this poem flowed good write and thanks for entering
Miss Ciara ann -
LOL I've been there...I think we all have at one point in time..I enjoyed this write. I totaly got the story from the write. I found it to have a choppy flow but thats totaly cool beacuse it works with what you are feeling. Good job poet! and good luck!
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