sunshine
escapes the blinds
casting a golden thread
that weaves about my soul
as I commit this day to you dear Lord
offering my time and talents
in silent surrender
while I bask in
sunshine
Author notes
9 Lines
Also a Rictameter
A contest entry
- PIF PICTURE CONTEST by penman.
900 points, ended March 7, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Hey
What happened to all your poetry? I only show 4 left on the site? -
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I have no idea why you can only see 4 pieces. I have 407 pieces on here and they show up for me! When you go to my author page and scroll down to my poems, click on SHOW ALL. You should be able to see them there.
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Ahhh, although spiritual but not religious...I can certainly see someone "basking in the light of the lord" here. Spiritually penned and pleasing to read.
~Tia
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wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest
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truly lovely.
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