In the illusory world of my dreams,
lacy snowflakes float, big as leaves;
but with no freezing felt,
when you catch one, it won't melt.
The moon's a bit brighter,
and lavender clouds
help to light the night
Clouds waft down
to hug a deserving person
every then and now.
Birds are like flying taxis;
their touch brings a body down to size
and takes one along on a winged ride
to enjoy the view from avian eyes.
Over oceans at peace;
no hurricanes nor tsunamis
People and animals living
together in greater harmony.
Children raised by nurturers,
all elders cherished;
no discrimination against
those with mental illlness.
No losses of eyesight nor limbs,
no need for anger, abuses & violence,
every disease, for healing, destined.
More dance, more song,
letting down of defenses,
freeing potential
No money, the currency is love;
with kindness, people greet each other.
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Comments
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sounds great to me.
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I have to agree with DT.com....Where can I sign up for this lovely world? Sounds exactly like what I'm looking for.
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wow very cool take on the prompt! i really like this one.
good luck in the contest!
=)
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I like your world! where do I sign up?
Nice work. Good flow and avoidance of cliche.
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