I was falling down and there was no to catch me
Failing at every thing with loss of laughter
My friends aren't there
They're all bastards
All these haters
That mean no good
Born alone and I'll die alone
Cried alone and lived alone
Going through misery and pain
No one who understands
Hope was lost, life was gone
I was cold, no laughter
Misery and in hell
Walked by the beach
I love the breeze
Needed to clear my mind
The rain is wonderful
To breath the cold air
Nobody around, so I thought
He sneaks by me, so quietly
Comes around and tells me
"Your beautiful please don't forget"
I smiled, started to talk, hung out, and fell in love
The best of us can find happiness in misery
A contest entry
- The best of us can find happiness in misery by Purush.
550 points, ended March 19, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Cool!
AWESOMEs! I really liked it!
There were some parts that didn't make sense, though. Like, where you left words out.
Other than that, though, it's great! -
All the best in my contest
"Nobody around, so I thought
He sneaks by me, so quietly
Comes around and tells me
"Your beautiful please don't forget"
I smiled, started to talk, hung out, and fell in love
The best of us can find happiness in misery"
nicely related to a lifetime and charming situation
All the best in my contest
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