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Epiphany

                        

 

 

at one time,
I held the power
to pull the threads,
to unravel your destructive web,
and liberate myself

instead I trusted you

so here I stand, watching
as you walk away,
noting your gait,
and the smile you flash


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  • Hi, good very good, many will relate to this write, congratulations on the gold,Di


  • Kari gold member
    March 7
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    I love this and the background really helps with the mood....
    Ty for your entry.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    March 5
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    So drawn in by the power of this write...Excellently written!