I smile and pretend I'm okay
When really I'm falling apart
Behind this smile is a lonely girl
With a rapidly breaking heart
I'm losing the hope I have
That someone will see my pain
I don't know whats left for me here
Or if I have anything left to gain
I try hard to make people see
All the pain that I hold deep inside
But no one cares enough to help
Like a curtain, I'm just pushed aside
My soul is eternally haunted
By memories I can't forget
The numbness from the razor blade
Is the only moments peace I get
So I smile and pretend I'm okay
When really I'm falling apart
My broken heart is bleeding
And my body wears the scars
A contest entry
- Emotionally Destroyed by xXemo-teddybearXx.
400 points, ended April 2, 77 entries
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I hate that feeling of no one cares...it sux...not your poem but the feeling sux lol...your poem was great!
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i likedit
this poem reminds me of my past. and all the times i cut myself. and how no one cared about me -
I love it & i can relate to it a lot. Feeling like no one cares is the worst feeling in the world
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amazing
wow
this was so deep
i cried reading this
in a good way though
but this was perfect
i related to this so much
i loved it
very great write
thankyou for entering my contest
goodluck
xXalyXx
his emo teddybear -
been there, dont that
i used to be a hardcore cutter, i've tried to kill myself too, so i get where you're coming from. the problem is it's not an easy habit to break. i couldn't do it alone, and i couldn't do it with the help of other people. the only reason i've stopped is because of God. i don't wanna get all preachy cuz idk how you feel about religion and whatnot. but i am living proof that God can change people.
i just want you to know you dont have to feel this way, you dont have to be alone. God will heal you, and He will never ignore you. if you get a chance, look up a song called "Scream" by ZoeGirl. it really helped me.
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