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When the snow falls

when the snow falls
in the city
one could say
its such a pity
as the snow
turns to black
on the world

when the snow falls
in the country
nobodys around to see
but hey now
I see
it so
beautifuly

cause when the snow falls
down on me today
I'm out in the middle of nowhere
its the only place
I seem to live
at all

and the snow
never turns to black
from neither smog or ash
its so white and beautiful
dancing in the sky and in the trees
even on the ground
where my steps make a crunching sound
I know I step on beauty
that glitters like the sun!

and when the snow stops falling
and it melts to the earth
beauty remains
in springtime
on earth

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