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times past

Subtle hints
                The quieting of your voice

Times past
                The ending of time’s future


Your voice quivers
                And my tears begin to fall

It’s nothing done
              But what is not done


Actions cease
              Lazy is not the cause

Growing apart
              We’ve gone our separate ways


Friendship bound
              Untwined by differences

Love endeared
            Never to be forgotten

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  • ennovy silver member
    March 5

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    Amazing....I could feel life, love and darkness within the read it's self....you put some deep emotional thoughts in the write.....wonderful....novy