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His Love for Me

His blows,(they hurt)but never kill
I say I'll leave but never will
His love is strong, oh dont you see?
These bruises prove his love for me!

I'm lost without him by my side
I'm his Bonnie, and he's my Clyde
I may look hurt, but I am sure
His love is nothing, if not pure.

His heart is big, his love is fierce
(No matter how his words may pierce)
It's not abuse, (that's not the case)
He simply puts me in my place.

He cares so much, he can't hold back
(that's why my eyes are blue and black)
The pain,(it fades, it goes away)
But oh! his love is here to stay.

Author notes

I was inspired and wrote this for english class for abusive relationships.

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  • Oh.My.Juliet
    March 26
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    This is awesome, so well written! Great write! Keep it up ((:


  • KatherineAnne
    March 14

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    Amazing! =)
    This describes an abusive relationship perfectly. The denial, the love that she doesn't need.

    "His heart is big, his love is fierce
    (No matter how his words may pierce)
    It's not abuse, (that's not the case)
    He simply puts me in my place."

    These were my favorite lines.
    Great job babe (: