I slipped between the fragments,
beneath jaded and only broken,
awakening alone holding nothing,
no more evenings under the stars,
laying for hours with sweet whispers,
dreams of our happy future together,
but it fell apart in a flash of my time,
leaving the second hand slowly ticking,
without you the days drag to months,
I cannot see hope over the darkness....
Author notes
Not really sure on this piece,just had to write and then got writers block....I really hope time is honestly a healer even after months,It come and goes....Thank you for reading xox
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writers block or not, I could feel your agony in this piece. I guess mostly because I am going through something similar. reading over it again it makes me want to cry.
the only thing I would change about this poem would be for it to be a little bit more drawn out...showing your deepest emotions about your situation.
but I loved it needless to say in every other aspect.
thanks for sharing-
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i wish that this write would have continued a bit more... great job... i know all about the writers block... have had it for quite sumtime myself... keep up the good work tho.
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