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awakened hearts in spring




when it rains
you will find
her

riding illusive rainbows
with an unconfined sliding joy
gently
hiding moonstones
in her pockets


when the wind blows
you will find
him

flying brightly painted kites
with an unbridled curiosity
deftly
weaving skylight
in his dreams


when storms come with wind with rain
you will find
them
with joyful curiosity
tenderly
becoming a softly mingled song
planting seeds of promise
for all futures
where dreams blend
into moonstones
and kites fly
among rainbows


~r.

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for Holly and Dan- May God bless you both abundantly

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  • rhondasail
    October 12

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    From the first line, I knew this was a poem meant for me....on this day, at this moment....WOW. The rush of the wind and the kiss of the rain, the height of the rainbow and the reach of a kite...you lifted my whole soul in this one Shepherd...as you always do.

    becoming a softly mingled song
    planting seeds of promise
    for all futures

    You plant seeds of a similar kind through your words. Peace be with you , Rhonda


  • myrataal silver member
    July 27
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    You are a tender soul, and aware.

    And I am your speechless fan. Beautiful, Richard! Holly and Dan appear to be quite the happy couple.

    Love
    Myra


  • soulfultia gold member
    April 2

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    This was simply Beautiful! The art work on the side is lovely as well, a perfect match for those beautifully inked words. Loved reading this...twice ha! ~Tia


  • kjack
    March 10

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    As always I sit in awe of your beautiful words of love. I was completely wrapped in moonstones and rainbows and tender promises. Excellent job on this piece. I was filled with love as I read through it, and may God bless Holly and Dan. This is a breathtaking tribute to them.

    becca


  • queenie gold member
    March 7

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    and may he bless you and i give thanks to him for assigning such a talent.my heart lifted like a spring day after reading this. i came in need of a shepherd's spirit and it was a blessed decision.thank you and i do so as much as holly and dan.

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