It's 1am..
Im awake and in tears..
Being with you..
Brings out all my fears..
All your little comments..
Make me sit and thinkk..
I dont know what im doing..
The tears sting as I blink..
I try to hold backk..
I don't want to fall..
Trying to hard..
Building up my wall..
You knock it down..
Your slowly breaking in..
It's all withering..
My barriers are to thin..
My heartt feels open..
No longer protected..
Prepared for the pain..
As love is injected..
Im losing myself..
Im losing sleep..
Lostt in you..
Im in too deep..
<3
Author notes
ermm. how do people readd this? im not sure if it expresses what i actually meant..
<3
3rd march 09.. 1am x
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yeahh not quitee myy best. andd yeppp your pretty muchh right aboutt how you readd it.
thankk you xx -
It reads nicely, the rhyming isn't incredible but still good. I like the way the end reads. As for how I see the poem, it just seems like someone insecure not wanting love. Good job
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