Lingering in poison from passion’s kiss
And embracing betrayal of broken vows,
Saturated with evidence running down her legs,
The wanton Jezebel returned home.
Kindred spirits were they, until the scent emitted.
I heard her scream from down the block.
Sisters were we until deceit took hold and
Struck her with death’s last kiss.
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Sad piece of poetry - great write - Joe ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- haqd
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Sisters were we until deceit took hold and
Struck her with death’s last kiss.
This is a great write. You did an awesome job with this. Great write -
An excellent write that tells us about much more than betrayal and deceit, Ros
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Great Acrostic, this is well written, bravo, blessings and love John
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