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No Sagacity

I am stupid to just sit here and watch
as you try your best to make things go your way...
It's always been that way,
hasn't it?
Your way or the highway?
I should just stand up and scream to you,
Shut up!
I don't care,
and I refuse to hear any of it!
But sadly I do not.
I want to just throw my fist out,
jump with glee as it makes contact-
but there is some better part of me that stops that,
and I do not know why.
I want so badly for all of this to work,
no conflict or altercations,
but I keep to myself,
mouth batten down on cowardness.
WHY?
Why must I do this over and over again,
put myself through this asphyxiation.
Oh yes,
I remember now...
because I have made it a point
to be the better person.

Author notes

I was mad about some things, and my boyfriend told me to write it down, so Idid. He likes it, but I don't think it's one of my best. Idk.

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  • poetry is soul
    March 27

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    Why must I do this over and over again,
    put myself through this asphyxiation.
    Oh yes,
    I remember now...
    because I have made it a point
    to be the better person.

    i really liked this part of the poem... your word choice was great, and your emotions were protrayed very well. (Not too sure about the spelling on that one.lol ) and just so you know... i don't think too many people would judge you if threw one little punch... you know that is what i would do. lol. but you didn't hear that from me. great job!


  • Pretty Britty
    March 5
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    Uh, boyfriend?


    • Cerbie20
      March 6
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      yeah, that would be the guy that i have been hanging out with almost everyday after school for the last month hun...