so it's back to this again- you can't control me now
i have him
and your petty little threatening won't hold me here today
because i no longer care that you and i share a last name
and a house
and this pain
in the ass
that i live with. because i'm tired
and i'm sore
from all your bull
in my mind......
i'm done.
A contest entry
- Can this be happening? by ciara12.
1350 points, ended March 9, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
He set my dreams free....
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Good write
If one cant feel the emotion here than that one is dead... Good job
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thank you
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amazing and it makes me think of the pain you have to endure through these situations...
thanks for entering
love forever and always
Ciara Ann -
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thanks for commenting, caring, and especially understanding.... Much love, Kelly
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I had a really really hard time finding the story line here... devorced?? Is what it sounds like to me. Great imagery tho, and the emotion sticks out just a little not alot tho. Keep penning and good luck!
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Yeah, divorced.... it wasn't really easy to write, and came out rather awkward, but it definitely fits the situation.... >_>
Thank you for commenting! Much love, Kelly
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