A first encounter
stimulate radiant
blushes
that move my
fluttering heart
into overdrive
As pink accents
adorn her plushy
lips
plump with flavors
of intimate flush
kisses
dipped in a sweet
chiffon elixir
of love
A contest entry
- pink by Saffron.
1100 points, ended April 13, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Darrell,
I really liked your description of romance, from the very first meeting through love. I have always liked “chiffon”, because it always implied “feminine” to me, and I think that it gave a nice soft touch to this poem.
Thank you so much for writing this poem, and for entering it into this contest, and for letting me get a peek of what “pink” means to you.
Saffron
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Really nice piece. I like the imagery a lot. You have such a way with words. Best of luck in the contest.
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So pretty
Beautiful for the prompt...
Lynda
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Oh wow! So pretty friend. Nicely done.
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Pretty in pink, indeed! A very smooth and lush poem that is very sensual, too. Lovely.
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oh I like very much!!!!!!!!
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Loved the intimacy in this one...
gre8t imagery as well.
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Painted pink and truer the romance shall speak in your words
A wonderful piece
Best wishes and good luck
Julie
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