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I lay here,
Breathless, But nothing can stop me now. &&DO YOU STILL WANT ME NOW. as i lay dying? x]]Comments
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by Snap.Crackle.PopOn Mar 5 2:35 PMLast login 1 day ago
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Beautiful. Good job. It could be more discriptive, sure, but it's still wonderful.