I lay here,
Breathless,
But nothing
can stop me now.
&&DO YOU STILL WANT ME NOW.
as i lay dying?
x]]
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cool
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awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
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Blahhhhhh!
I love it(:
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I would want you even if you were lying there dying. Quite a creative poem.
Beautiful. Good job. It could be more discriptive, sure, but it's still wonderful.
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