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bEYOND fIXATION

i lie here,
waiting for you.
but you never come.
feed to to the wolves,
do what you wish..
but think os me.
think of me fondly
before i am too broken.
i will soon be gone,
too late to be fixed...
i will be broken.
beyond.
fixation.

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  • lexie like woah
    March 5
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    gahhh this is amazing
    <3

    i noticed an error though in line 6

    =)