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Angel

hear the whispers in the dark
the night is being created in the free of the air
oxygenated light
froze through my window
and the glaze of heaven shielded me
from ever reaching my knights virtue

I gracefully took the wine off the shelf
only to find an angel looking down upon me
glass after glass I became more aware of her unique beauty
for a girl like her only found once in every lifetime

The awkard silence consumed me
as I felt as if a realm of majestic attributes
surrounded me
I fell into a gaze
looking peerlessly at the wall of bordem and sorrow
waiting for the clock to strike 12
only noon time would tell
if my dream was just my imagination
or some sort of strange but blunt reality

I closed my eyes
yet the opened on their own
for the angel I had just seen
was only me
staring helplessly into the mirror
of creativity.

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  • Love this

    Finally coming around to finally seeing who you truly are?! I love this. The raw beautiful energy is just breath taking.

    "I closed my eyes
    yet the opened on their own
    for the angel I had just seen
    was only me
    staring helplessly into the mirror
    of creativity."

    I love this. It's truly amazing. No one else but you can pull this off. A beautiful piece. Your best yet. Congrats.
    Johnny