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Loving in Our Pleasure Room

When night falls into enticing quiet
Our parted lips meet desire’s embrace
Hearts racing at moonrise after night falls
Darkness has settled; our bodies intertwined
Tender time of loving in our pleasure room
Parted for many days; we have dreams to live


Our senses reeling demand pleasures promises
Fingers amorously filled with carnivorous desire
Massaging fragrant oils upon your breasts
Your nipples swelling getting hard and inviting
Trailing kisses down your delicate neck
Taking one nipple in my mouth very gently,

My tongue flicking lapping and sucking slowly,
Thirsting hungrily filling my mouth,
Tasting rosy nipples rolling each around.
My lips travel down your body kissing,
Dwelling worshipping on the curve of your hips.
My mouth finds the sweet triangle of love,


Arousing you further as hips arch in frenzy.
You roll your legs up as I rise up on knees,
Sliding in slowly, into slick velvet grip.
Hands on my back pulling me closer.
Forcing me to push and thrust deeper
Muscles contracting swift rise and fall

Loins joined in rhythmic pleasure
Uncontrollable thrusts of passion
I shudder inside you, bringing our bodies together
Climaxing intensely with the final thrust
Still inside you as our lips meet gently


Lingering on the tender beating of your heart
Our breath slows drifting in loves rapture


Author notes

1Fragrant oils
2: Desire
3: Embrace
4: Breasts
5: Nipples

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  • azlyn gold member
    March 8

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    Congratulations on the Shiny Baby!!! This is so very sensual and so blessed with purest passion. A night of tender and lustful loving...a wonderful combination. Heats me up for certain...thinking of making love in this pleasure room...mmmm. I really like the flow of this write, I had to read it over and over just for the sheer beauty of the work itself. This is well written poetry...and wonderful erotica.

    Love and esss!!!

    Me


  • hotchocolate gold member
    March 5

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    I love it!!! I enjoyed reading this piece from you and good luck in the contest hon

    My tongue flicking lapping and sucking slowly,
    Thirsting hungrily filling my mouth,
    Tasting rosy nipples rolling each around.
    My lips travel down your body kissing,
    Dwelling worshipping on the curve of your hips.
    My mouth finds the sweet triangle of love,


  • Nymphetemine
    March 5

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    Wow dear poet this was finger licking good.. Great write and use of words. The intensity grew througout the write.. Cold shower time I think!!!lol
    Good luck in the contest
    Love and Light AngelofLight

    • AngelofLight

      thank you for this fine contest so many great poets. I am honored to have been in it.

  • Sighs-Your words once again captivate me and leaving me in deep thoughts of your words. Very inviting and the imagery, as always, was immaculate.

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