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In Solitude

In solitude,
Where we are least alone,
Praying for some kind of Hell,
In a segment of Heaven.
What do know about myself?
And how can you say you know me,
When the true me is gone,
Faded away
Like a blank folded paper,
Which holds the sweetest words
Of all:
"It might have been,
It should have been,
But nothing
Is as it should be..."

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  • HeLovesMeNot
    March 6
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    Wow, the endingn is powerful. It was overall a great read.

  • I really liked the lines 5-10 they hit me the most. This is a very good write. well penned and emotional.

    -deadly


  • hisaddiction
    March 5

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    "it might have been,
    It should have been
    But nothing
    Is as it should be".......that was brilliant