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Leaning on Hearts like Yours

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In perplexed society,

forked roads without streetlights, and

weavers without threaded needles.

 

“Leaning on hearts like yours.”

 

Minds twisted in knots of fury,

men chasing worldly dreams, strumming

melancholy melodies.

 

“Leaning on hearts like yours. “

 

Where souls swim in seas of sorrow,

disheartening as broken toys

or little boys without fathers.

 

“Leaning on hearts like yours.”

 

Potters without their molding clay,

seeking visions to breathe in light

you bestow them hopes of heaven.

 

“Leaning on hearts like yours.”

 

Through trials of your own, you live,

guiding us with love and laughter

with faith so strong, through penman’s song.

 

“Leaning on hearts like yours.”

Author notes

Love you my dear brother, thanks for being here for so many, and please don't forget, I'm here for you. As many seeds you've sown in weary hearts, may you reap the fruits a hundred fold. Peace.

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  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    June 17

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    i really like the repetition here. i thought of my real brother timmy when i read the line: “Leaning on hearts like yours.” thank you for always sharing such a great heart. viyanna rosemarie


  • Three Doves
    April 17

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    I can't explain why I've been away from viewing your poetry for so long. But I'm forever grateful for the opporunity to read such a beautiful, heartfelt dedication. You're poetic talent always amazes me though I know it shouldn't. You're just that way.
    Peace to you my brother and friend.
    In God's Love
    Noah


  • Paloszoo gold member
    March 16

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    Beautiful write. The repetition is very effective. Thanks for entering this dedication contest to Penman. I'm sure he's touched by your write! I know I am! I'm honored to have you show your work here!


  • Sharon Corr gold member
    March 13

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    ~A Beautiful Masterpiece~

    ~All My Love, Sharon~ Your words are rich, vibrant, and most of all healing. Thank you for your special touch, may you and your family be blessed in the richness of your special love~


  • Rose Angel gold member
    March 12

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    With exquisite imagery, emotions so warm, and love, you have spun a creation so fitting to your brother, and we can heartily agree, "we do lean on a heart like his", always ready to listen, encourage and comment....God bless him.... write!


  • Arjita gupta
    March 12
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    the words are beautifully woven.....awesome!


  • Jalalbad gold member
    March 8
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  • queenie
    March 7

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    this is truly penman's song and the lyrics portrait the essence of a man whose pen invites you to lean on his heart. the technical aspect of this is woven with threads of talent that makes you the weaver of thr finest patterns of poetry. my best to you in the contest.


  • ariazephyrzoe gold member
    March 7

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    “Leaning on hearts like yours.”

    your heart does that to me as well


    FlyShy


  • smiley
    March 6

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    awesome

    you have brought tears to my eyes.. beautifully penned and a wonderful tribute...

    Yvonne


  • penman gold member
    March 6
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    Excellent

    Aww thank you brother for you beautiful gift. It is so touching and heart felt. Such a joy to read.


  • Lonely
    March 5

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    This is a beautiful dedication.. As you express so well the person you are writing the poem for, in this material world, there are some people who are like light in the dark.
    So are you my dear.. You are the rainbow
    Excellent dedication to I'm sure an excellent person.

    Love ya so much
    Lonely


  • StarEyes
    March 5

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    This is truly Beautiful! But coming from a Beautiful soul such as yourself, what else is there to expect! You did a fantastic job on this one! I love it! I love that line..

    "Leaning on Hearts Like Yours"

    That stands on it's own and says sooooooo much about him!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta

  • siahaan
    March 5
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    awwwww
    =)


  • Heavenly Angel gold member
    March 5

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    This is very nice, sweetness; I quite like it and I'm sure it touched the heart of penman. You have such a giving and caring heart, hon
    Wishing you light and love,
    Sister Sandy


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    March 5
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    Well written, such great love and care in each word. Amazing piece.


  • poet2angels gold member
    March 5

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    Gorgeous as always dear Bro
    You always make everyone feel so special as only you can

    Lynda


  • Angelflower
    March 5
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    beautiful and heartfelt dedication.


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    March 5
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    That refrain works well.

    Nice bro.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    March 5

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    This is amazing and truly beautiful! You penned words of truth and love that many of us can not even touch...and okay this hit me the hardest as you know why..."Where souls swim in seas of sorrow,

    disheartening as broken toys

    or little boys without fathers.".

    Yet by grace and love your son is not one of those forgotten and for saken...

    Your heart is as golden as Williams...

    Blessings,


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