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Forever Yours

I know that I screw up
I know I make you cry
I know I don't show you my love
I know I don't know why

But throughout all the pain I cause
I do want you to know
That I love you so much more
Than this thing I show

The ring is on my finger
And look at how it shines
I promise to be forever yours
If you'll be forever mine

Author notes

Forever Yours ^.^ well.. not yours, but Joey's

even if I don't show how much I love you, my dear Joseph, I truly do. I have said yes to you and meant it. I'm sticking by you, love, so long as you stick by me.

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  • PureRomance
    March 9

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    This poem is so sweet and beautiful. You did an amazing job with the title I gave you. I hope that Joey likes this too. I'm sure he does. Best of luck to you and your poem in this contest and God bless you always. Keep up the amazing work.