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Pigeon's Run (A Limerick)

I walked beneath the mountains shade
flying above flocking pigeons made
A motion to lurch near
I saw suddenly clear,
The pigeons sudden quick serenade.

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  • Mistress Leala silver member
    March 5
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    Beautiful. Leaves me feeling at peace, being serenaded by Pideons.