Not pathetic,
would be easy...
lately I'm
feeling queasy...
Rabbit died,
cat too...
broke a tie on
my shoe...
Soul now being
sold...
...points?
Gold?
Author notes
25 pathetic words...lol
thanks for a great contest
A contest entry
- 20-25 Words Easy Points by GotLilt.
1000 points, ended March 11, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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That's sad!
But at least you broke your tie on a shoe.
Nicely done.
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Ahh the selling of the soul, desperate times...lol. Excellent little ditty, certainly fills the woe is me quota for the day
Good luck in the contest!
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pregnancy can get pathetic,
but you might get points cause I'm sympathetic!
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Like the flow of the words my friend. Has a whimsical feel to it. Like the imagery. Nicely done.
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