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The Box (a limerick)

Once a young man put away his mind
At first in a box, he stored it kind,
But soon it leaked away
enclosed the fibers lay,
You see he baked his brains so confined.

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  • AnaelCathetelEcanus silver member
    March 5, 2009
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    Reminds me of Hannibal Lecter. Very visual and intriguing.