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Tree of Anquish

Toxic mist of hatred
defiles a sacred relic,
whose roots degenerate
beyond the earth's core

As withering limbs cry out
in the darkness,
for the light of hope
that yesterdays rain promised

Feeling the outrageous misfortunes
of a corrupt society that
has unfulfilled their duties
as caretakers of a viable planet

The heritage of its eternal existence
hanging in the balance,
as weary implants cling to depleted soil,
in a last attempt for its own suvival





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  • echo-ink
    March 7
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    WOW!



    finals


  • penman gold member
    March 6
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    Excellent

    A wonderful take on the prompt. So very creative and well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.