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Of Shinies & Points

I do believe
another shinie
would look rather dashing

        ...along side the others --

however,
I'm in no need of points,

            so I'd gladly PIF them.


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Prompt:

I have points to give to some worthy soul. Tell me in 20-25 words why it should be you Don't be pathetic. I like humor but no erotica or profanity The more original the better, but it needs to make sense!

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    March 10

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    Nicely done, PIF is a good idea! Especially if you don't need them I have more points than I need to, should hold contests more. Excellent little verse, good luck!


  • retribusive
    March 5

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    Hah, for the contest, this is maddddd good. Very catchy.

    Don't you have enough trophies?!??!! Actually, there's no such thing as too many. And you deserve every last one you got.

    Best of luck!


  • crimsondew
    March 5
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    Well thought out!


  • maralisa silver member
    March 5
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    a wonderful take on the promt good luck in the contestmaralisa


  • Ademon
    March 5

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    I love writing, I love points, and somehow when the two come together, I feel special about myself that I have proven to be insightful, possibly delightful, and yes sometimes quite sad, though we all love points and wish for as many as we can have...Points are much like my ex-fiance...They just simply don't matter...

  • LitNup
    March 5
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    Pass them to me me me LOL


  • GotLilt
    March 5
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    Honesty! I like that


  • Soft-Rain
    March 5
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    Heehee

  • Good one.

    Very nice concept, Tim. I'd ask for those point, but I have enough as it is. Good luck.

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