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Passion's Arrow

Pierced by archer's arrow of love,
vulnerable was this heart of steel.
Shedding my armor so willingly,
releasing passion so unreal.

An arrow cast from distant shore,
you slowly pulled back your bow.
Straight to my heart, the target,
as it struck love began to flow.

Overwhelming, invading senses,
upon my hand your tender touch.
Wanton feelings become warmer.
thoughts stir of passion and such.

Desire danced deep within,
hearts a flutter like butterflies,
My eyes told you, come love me,
whispering softly, hear my sighs.

Waves of passion overcame us,
pounding the shores of ecstacy.
Building up to a crecendo,
hit the bullseye, love flows free.


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  • LittleMoon silver member
    March 6

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    An arrow cast from a distant shore.......hmmmm.
    Another nice one Sandy, well done. Sheila


    • Sandygram
      March 7
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      Thank you Shelia. I am glad you enjoyed. Yes another arrow aimed at the heart.
      Reminds me of the quote.
      " I shot an hour into the air, it landed I know not where.

      You take care my friend. Hugs to you. Sandy


  • mzmikki
    March 6
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    This is wonderful Sandy!


    • Sandygram
      March 7
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      Thank you so much mzmikki for reading. Take care and have a wonderful weekend. Sandy

  • mcheadle
    March 5
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    love has made it's hit

    Love now moves in your heart wow lucky you...mac


    • Sandygram
      March 7
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      Hello Mac

      Your nice comment brought me a smile. Thank you dear friend. Hugs tyo you.

      Always, Sandy

  • Bravo!

    Now, that's what I call a love poem. Lovely flow to this one. Good one, Auntie Sandy.


    • Sandygram
      March 7
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      Hello Jaime

      A delight to read your lovely comment. You take care. Hugs my sweet nephew.

      Love, Sandy


  • Rovingone gold member
    March 5

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    You just keep doing it don't you Sandy. Always the finest love poems. Sounds like this one is more optimistic. Got a new honey?

    • Sandygram
      March 7
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      Hello Ed,

      Thank you for the wonderful comment my friend. Always a delight to hear from you. Bless you, take care. Hugs, Sandy

  • SoulWhispher
    March 5
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    Another love poem that does ...hit the bullseye.... a most enjoyable read, blessings with love John


    • Sandygram
      March 7
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      Thank you again my dear friend

      Hugs and smile for you. Thank you for reading and commenting. Take care, Sandy

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