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If you will be

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I would be prince of all the skies and all  below
want for nothing ever, all my wants you would bestow
the lord of all the Earth, it would be mine in every way
  if we could share it, just we two, through every lovely day

  Desire nothing ever, all my wants you would bestow
cares and trials would fall away happiness would flow
we'd wander through these meadows stand beneath the summer sun
embrace and hold and know our hearts enjoining beat as one

The lord of all the Earth, it would be mine in every way
if you would only take my hand and walk with me this day
and we would share a happiness, I know it would be ours
as lovely as you are to me in this your crown of flowers

Yes, we could share it, just we two, through every lovely day
this second turn immortal if I only hear you say
you'll be my love not only now, but for forever more
I'll know I have found heaven and the angel I adore
 
 
 

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  • Denerica
    March 18

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    So beautiful anyone would be blessed to have you for their prince, you are so romantic and you know how to pen back in time to make it feel like now...just wonderful. Blessings.


  • Broken-Rickie
    March 7
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    Such a beautiful write and the picture matches it perfectly.


  • Oh.My.Juliet
    March 7
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    Awww, this is beautiful. I realy love the picture you painted. It's amazing

  • amysticwriter silver member
    March 6
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    Lovely write...


  • Amera gold member
    March 5

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    Beautifully written quatrain with wonderful rhyming flow. I love the story and it goes so well with the picture.

    Love,
    Amera♥

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