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You

YOU
the one who destroyed me
im alone now
and YOU
you left me to my
own devices!
You let me go
and I let you die
is it right?

Im sorry if this isnt very good...Please be nice...=)

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  • momwitzman
    March 6, 2009
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    I like this, but it seems to need more. I want to hear more about how he destroyed you.

  • FallingRainDrop
    March 6, 2009

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    this is good! i think itd be wonderful if you added some stuff to it cus its a great start to sumthing that could be even better! :] i really liked it tho. *peace and love*. :]