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Safe Haven


evil exists, in torrents;
terrorism hits towns
& foul play replays
too often to speak

yet I believe
we all want the same...

something to believe in.

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    March 6

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    Perfect sense and meaning...great ending and I do believe you are right, we all need/want something to beleive in...nicely done.

    mystic

  • It makes sense to me. I think it is a nice little poem. Great job.


    Mike

  • perfect sense. great ending... it's the hope we hold onto, wanting to believe in the good even when we can't see it. thank you for your entry.