Pussycat!
Meow,
Meow,
scents of musky fur
tail in the air
purr's
as she strides in
perfect wet pink
wide eyes--- hesitant
…slow approach
sniff sniff
lick... -look-
lick--lick
grrrrrrrrrr
yelp-
this Puppy dog!
is... shit out of luck
Author notes
it's... just not the same
In a list
A contest entry
- PROMPT: It's... just not the same by Mr Id.
900 points, ended May 17, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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tell me about it.
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haha!
Excellent- this is really unique and though I don't see how, or even if, you've used the prompt, it's so different to the other entries that I am going to let that slide.
Nice work from an agressive cat's persepective!
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you wanted unique and though it's outside the box... it was written to the prompt you just have to think about it a while..
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