Elevation in my heart beats
Reassures me of your love
I know I finally have you
Choosing happiness and making it real
Loving you makes me whole
Each day,
Every breath
Removing all distance between us
Each night,
Every dream
Vivid images of our future
Envelopes me
Stay forever
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he is my air
an acrostic
Written February 25th, 2004
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a poem that is full of smiles and dancing life across the pages of love - hello to eric, enjoy the world we live in
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excellent
that was powerful, i love the way you used each letter. is the name your son's or your man's?? -
Awwwww this is soooo sweet....you definitely can write!!!! Probably the best acrostic I've read (not that I've read a lot of them but still)...the flow is just incredible! It seems so natural...absolutely beautiful!!!
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New fave
That one is my new favorite. He sounds like a great guy, and lucky too. -
thank you so much, i don't do many acrostics, but my baby is so much a part of me that it came out rather easily...except he has a lot of e's in his name....LOL
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Awe, Ok, so Im back sooner than expected. lol
I didn't notice this was an Acrostic, Most of the acrostics that I have read really dont have much flow but this was like..silk. And so very beautiful. I really, once again, loved this piece.
Keep it Up!
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*AWWWWW*
Awwww (gushes) So cute and sweet!!! Yay! A happy poem.
Great job
Peace and love
Susan
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hung on an accrostic is the shape of two hearts as one,two sets of feet dangling in a babbling brook, two lips against tow more, to wet passions appetite....love is a quick pulse and a hard to swallow when she's near kind of thing, hard to breathe without the gentle sighs of her pauses between kisses...nice poem he should be very happy with this...Artis
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