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"Thousand Mercies"

Your love is higher than the mountains
Peaceful as the serene seas
It's your love that always strengthens
I thank you for your thousand mercies

In every moment of my life you are there
I nurtured your love in me
Like a holy creed,a silent prayer
In every drop of my blood completely

When I couldn't breathe,you infused life in me
Helping me overcome my fears
When I didn't have eyes,you helped me see
You were always there to wipe away my tears

Your love is higher than mountains
Peaceful as the serene seas
It's your love that always strengthens
I thank you for your thousand mercies

When my soul is burdened
And troubles come my way
You are always there in every second
Never to have walked away

Here I am,waiting for you in silence
When you will come and sit with me
Blessing me with your presence
Your love will set my soul free



Your love is higher than mountains
Peaceful as the serene seas
It's your love that always strengthens
I thank you for your thousand mercies

Your love is higher than mountains
Peaceful as the serene seas
It's your love that always strengthens
I thank you for your thousand mercies

5th "March" 2009


© 2006-2009 Rinzu Susan Rajan


Author notes

INSPIRED BY THE SONG "YOU RAISE ME UP" BY JOSH GROBAN

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  • enjoyed reading it very much. lovely written. thanks for sharing.

  • Humm.. you speak so intimately here in the wonderful poetry..thank you so much for sending your work in my contest...

  • gr8 song beautiful write as well

  • I love the song that you were inspired by. It is a very beautiful song. This was written very well. I quite liked it. It touched my heart to read this.

    -deadly


  • teardrop gold member
    March 9

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    Beautiful

    Congrats on your trophy. Well deserved. This is very beautiful. I read a lot of your profile as well and I can see you are a very caring person. Words from the heart don't lie.

  • I liked it very much

    its the way i fell completely about my man

    thanks for entering

  • amen to that. very true! thanks for entering.


  • penman gold member
    March 6
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    wonderful

    Very creative and touching. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


    • rinzurajan
      March 6
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      thanks...It's my pleasure to have recieved such a beautiful and encouraging comment from a poet of your calibre...
      thanks once again...


  • Denerica
    March 6
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    Wonderful creed of a beautiful prayer written here. Blessings.

  • Speechless
    this was really an amazing poem.
    Really I don't know what to say.

  • This is lovely words. Thank you for sharing with me and good luck in the contest. Nice poem.
    Michael


  • Cannonsfire
    March 5
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    Beautiful expressions here, good luck in the contest C


  • LovelyLauren
    March 5

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    Oh, this is lovely, and the one repeating quatrain is a very nice touch.

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