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From The Heat Of The battle.

Finally found
in the desert,
his once sunny side up,
flipped over hard on a
skillet made of sand.
They buried him at Arlington
killed in the shine of duty.

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  • Native Ameri Girl
    March 10, 2009
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    Truer words were never spoken

    In 7 sentences you have expressed the emotion and depth of a soldiers anthem. Very moving.


  • Darkness-My Home
    March 5, 2009
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    This is great... it really gets you thinking...