I saw God's light and felt him calling
There was no fear, only a tingly warmth and peace,
I knew it was my time to go, so I mounted my crotchrocket
and made my exit from earth.
I Zrrrooooooommmed into heaven,
making a spectacular entry to meet God.
He didn't mind, he smiled and told me he loved racing
Dear brothers I wish I could have seen your faces,
God gave me bestest crotchrocket ever!!
Sleek and shiny and blue, it was awesome!
He got his own too, we hold races on Heaven's track.
I can never beat the guy but its so cool.
Heaven was a place I could never have imagined
I swear I saw Mr Kennedy playing table tennis with God
Do not weep or fear that I am alone
There are children my age here,
we sing, we laugh We play our own sports,
There is no misery here, no pain, no war, or terror.
I have a job too, God assigned me a job can you believe it?,
I promised God to try and make you all smile
You and Daddy and my brothers and sisters.
I promised to look after you all back on earth.
I am being a good boy I promise,
I love you dearly, and I can look after you here
I watch over you all every day, and I hate to see those tears.
I am your Guardian angel now, I am forever with you.
I'll see you all again I promise I will!!
Now I must go, I'm going to play basketball with the angels.
Love you lots and lots.
A contest entry
- In Loving Memory... by Timeless Wisdom.
22250 points, ended March 23, 45 entries
Silver trophy winner
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wow i really love this. i love the opening stanza, really well written
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I enjoyed this very much! Someone once said that heaven will be the heaven we imagine it to be: and I'm sure a young boy would imagine just this! How consoling for those left behind who loved him. Very nicely done. *Lita*
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Aw ellen
Lovely write
so cute
it made me wonder if i am still alive lol
fantastic
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OMG ELLEN! Awesome! Write another one!!!! It made me and michael laugh...it was soooo cute the words that you used to make it sound like the words of a child. Awesome job!!
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I seem to have reached my limit heheh now i'm on a writer's block
but this truly is a lovely contest, and you have plenty of brilliant writes here! Raymond seriously there are lots of good ones on here written by others 
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