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This life is for our souls to reckon

 

Know that this life with all of its sorrow

Pain and fleeting pleasures is not the end

No, but a just transition point, a rest stop

If you will, and perhaps a testing of sorts.

 

As I lived, I held a rather strange thought

Always there, always following or even

Preceding what I did, or failed to do and

That was, “this is for your soul to reckon.”

 

Many paths have I trod, some treacherous

Others, smooth and pleasant as if planned

I recall them all, every sharp turn, hill and

Rut in great detail, I cherished every step.

 

Please remember me for ‘who’ I was, not

For my accomplishments, or lack of them

Because many before me, and after, have

And will do greater things of that I’m sure.

 

I was just a faulted man who loved much

Hated little, and most proud to say, I did

Persevere, and my soul is stronger for it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • MysticBlue gold member
    April 21
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    Wonderful meaning and very thought provoking. I love this.
    Hugs, Marie


  • trekkergirl
    April 20

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    Very powerful write that you have here. Full of imagery and sadness. I liked it. Thanks for sharing this with us.


  • Kristin103161
    April 14
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    Tears

    This is an excellent prose and it made me cry!!

    Kristin


  • Heart Sutra
    March 31
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    This is a wonderful poem. Excellent.


  • requiempoet gold member
    March 28

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    This is a very sad but true poem. You know you almost sounded like my father...which is very scary because I didn't think anyone thought like he does. But I suppose I've picked up on a little bit of that thinking too, don't live in the past, live in the future. :-) great honest write.

  • Pwwerful

    Beautiful but almost sounds like an epitaph?
    Your words resound and resound again.
    Annette


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    March 24
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    awesome write!




  • MysticBlue gold member
    March 19

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    This is beautiful and full of meaning. Yes, what we are instead of what we have done. I like that.
    Marie

  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    March 13
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    Yes, well, where to start.


  • Emmyb gold member
    March 13
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    beautiful


  • Ann45 gold member
    March 12

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    It is Clear from this poem, that you feel like you have won your inner battles. Just my thought mind.
    Well done.
    Ann


    • MJ Donnelly gold member
      March 12
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      For the most part, yes, but who knows what will rise with the next dawn.

      Thank you for reading dear.


  • BlancetNoir gold member
    March 10

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    Oh, I love this, it is eloquent and has a timeless quality, it is philosophical and has a spirit to it without pushing a religion, just certain universal truths, about soul, evolution, learning, the cycles of life and our changing emotions, the choices we make and the importance of perseverance to the human spirit in it's earthwalk. When I read it I can hear it being spoken out loud, which is something that happens when I'm reading something that has great clarity, simplicity at it's best, it reminds me of the wisdom of Benjamin Franklin who was a wise man with a great gift for communicating ideas.


  • BearWoman gold member
    March 10

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    Powerful, contemplation provoking

    Mmm. Yes: spiritual, reflective. A bit sad in a way, although not quite really (?). Interesting choice of form for this write, it gave a certain character to the tone/voice. I'm taking in the impact right now, so not sure how I might suggest to change it. The poem is complete from beginning to summation.

    “this is for your soul to reckon.” especially induced reflection for me, and I'm already trying it on as a yardstick for my own use. As such, this write was personally valuable to me.

    ~your special huggy bear


  • Angelflower
    March 6

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    such a powerful write.. I really don't know what to say.. You always shock me with how different your writes are to the next.. I love it! thank you very much for sharing..

    Angel

  • I love this!

    This is what I wanted to say a while back but couldn't really express very well!

    Perfect. Polished. Succinct.

    You're a master of poetry!


  • cubert
    March 5

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    I strong lovely piece to introduce me to you. I like the timbre of no regrets.

    "And will do greater things of that I’m sure."

    This line and the few preceding were my favourite, but my brain really wants to read that 'of' as 'than'. I have no complaints aside from that lol.

    C

  • The first stanza is very true. Heck I think the entire poem is very honest, but I really love the first stanza. Well done and well written.

    -deadly


  • Amera gold member
    March 5

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    Beautiful and penned with deep emotional sincerity; you have composed a wonderful flow in this piece and the structure is aesthetically beautiful. If I was to make any suggestion at all it would be to justify the text on both sides. The lines are so close now it would clean the structure up beautifully and the extra spacing wouldn’t be noticed at all.

    Love,
    Amera♥

    • MJ Donnelly gold member
      March 5
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      I have a dumb question, how do you 'justify the text on both sides?'


      • Amera gold member
        March 5
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        On the top of your rich text buttons in the center you will see line diagrams for justification; Left, Center, Right and Double. Highlight your entire poem and click the justification icon.

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