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Wish I Could Stay

There is an old, worn cliché
it fits me just like a glove,
as if custom made for me
“You always hurt the one you love.”

If only  I could go back
take that test all over again,
put back  the broken pieces
oh  if only I weren’t human!

“If at first you don’t succeed”
or in my case if you fail to pass,
not just once but more than three
“Don’t let the door hit you in the a--.”

“Better to have loved and lost
than never to have loved” they say
I  destroyed the greatest of loves
I must go,  how I wish I could stay!

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  • goalsv
    March 5

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    A poem really showing your regret and the feeling that you would definantly nchange the past if you could. Soemtimes e must go and hope we can return but with Gods help He will lead us where He wants us.