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somewhere.




there is something inside
i want to dig out, tumble-dry
and keep wrapped somewhere in
a corner of the universe.

so that somewhere in a star
we'll dig our toes into burning
sandy crystals, bathe in mercury
and sleep on polluted skies.

i can dance with you forever,
if only i knew where to look.


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  • oh.holy.cow. this is exactly how i feel sometimes, almost all the time actually. i just love love love this man, just dont ever stop writing okie, you'll be doing the world a favor

  • wow.


  • Walk-Free
    March 5

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    goodness..

    brilliant hallucinations & daydreams

    my thoughts went on and on even after the words ended. love the last 2 lines...


  • a59teeth
    March 5
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    natural talent

    wonderful last lines!!