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I Became Your Faded Image As The Rain Stopped

Missing image

Sitting cross legged

grief resides. 
Blankly I stare into whiteness.
Emotions tucked away
hidden beneath scar tissued heart.

Contemplating writing
knowing  actions will cause hardness.  
 Our love story untold,

I fear my abrasion's
will hurt you.

Even now my concern binds me.


Painful but brief.
Lovestruck words day after day
listening to your lullabies
Yes pied piper,

I followed you into Utopia.

I was your one~
Eyes giving all secrets held bad or good.
My love given till drained dry
like drought in summer heat.
No rain in sight as i still prayed.

A beautiful make believe bride.
Until my perfection melted,
your eyes glazed over ...hope gone,
for super model never will i be.

 

 I became your faded image~ 



Now we are here in this house
together.

 "Friends" 

 finally light driven away
as realization becomes truth.


 I can not make you love me~

Instead, releasing you now~ 
 my eyes void except

 one by one

hot anguished tears fall.

 You must bravely walk away, from my comfort.
Please...


 I don't have the will to say go.

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  • imlost911
    August 14

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    Beautiful

    The emotions are very intense. I like the wording in this poem.

  • I don't have the will to say go.

    heartbreaking. i dont know what else to say.


  • BluesMan gold member
    March 21
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    OMG The emotional devistation in this poem, has me awe struck. I really like your style. Your words are a bold and powerful verneer, that shields your egg shelled emotions. Quite a bit of my emotional poetry is also written in this style. I happy you made me a favorite.
    Bill


  • vicisstus
    March 5
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    Very Intense

    That struck me deep, Written exquisitely and covered all aspects. Best of luck!


    • Soft-Rain gold member
      March 6
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      vicisstus!

      Wow i am very humbled and wanted to say thank you for the Gold and support.
      It made my day as you can see i don't write often lately. So again thanks!

      ~Lisa~


  • Rovingone gold member
    March 5

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    Can we really give up that which made us feel so fine and beautiful? It never comes out that easily in the end. The pain still remains there with the loss and the memories that don't really fade all that much. You made a bold statement in a most romantic, bitter sweet way. It's compelling.

  • Beautiful


    It is something that I can relate to and and the emotions are portrayed beautifully.
    There is so much longing in the words, I can really feel the impact that the love has had.

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