It was a cold, dark, and windy night. When I saw the very sight,
that changed my life forever. To be the same again? No, Never?
a gift was given, that made me cry.
My heart was taken, it made me fly.
To glide, on the wings of love.
Delivered, by our lord GOD above.
A beautiful bundle of joy, that was not a boy.
A wonderful child, for me. the point of life, now I see.
My little angel so sweet and pure, to all my sadness a cure.
I have watched and guided, all decisions decided.
Over the years of life, through joy and strife.
I have learned and taught, given in, and faught.
My little Angel and I, together we we cry.
Together, we love away. Loving still, to this very day.
My advise to you, from loved to loved.
Enjoy every single minuet you lived
Author notes
This I wrote bcause its what came to heart. I feel you both will enjoy this. The ending isn't that strong but I am thinking on changing it around... But I would like to hear how you two feel about the whole thing first. O yea I wrote this through someone else eyes for I am not a father. I don't know who lent me their vision but I am grateful... I tink I will remove the last two lines...
How was the ending. I feel It went kinda weak...
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did you mean minute in the last line? if so, leave it as minuet. It's a better word for it.
love,
mylee
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awe =] this is beautiful.
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