Colorful splashes of orange, yellow and red
All around on the earth many are dead
I sit and watch as each leaf falls free
as with each big gust thy let go of there tree
Then as if by magic each takes a dancing flight
some blow so high my eyes lose them from sight
Then gently they flow back to the ground
To rest once more without a sound
Yes autumn is upon us and winters so near
and for this young man it's my favorite time of year.
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A contest entry
- Nature Lovers by StormyDawn.
1000 points, ended March 18, 15 entries
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Autumn is the best season which I like and I also
like the way you have described it. Its simple and
nicely written with an openess...good write
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Simply amazing, beautiful poem. Poems which describe nature are my favourite. You did awesome job here.
Nela
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ahhh I like this one... autumn is a very pretty time of year around here.... cooler than the summer pretty because of the colors and the ending of our life cycles around here. I like this write as it brings to me some pleasant memories. Thanks for sharing this with us.
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A beautiful write about the Fall. A very nice flow as well. Thank you for entering, and best of luck.
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I love autumn! You displayed it's picturesque beauty well.
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Beautiful
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nice watching leaves take flight. I too love autumn,
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this is,
amazing!
truley, i wrote a poem about winter/fall once,, but its nowhere as good as this.
keep wriring, pleeaasseee!
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lol that was awesome. i love that last line. it made me laugh. =]
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My favourite too. Here in N.Z. it is Autumn now. I particularly liked the third stanza.
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