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In my eyes

What do you see,
  when you look in my eyes?
Do you see the
  want, need. and passion?

How many times, I
  have looked in to your soul,
And seen all the,
  love, pain, desire, and beauty!

The person who understands best,
  the one that loves most,
The truth, in the lies,
  the light, in the night.

Always here,
  always there!
Never a lie!

Forever I care,
  forever I love

I love you with everything I have,
I love with all that I've lost,
and all that I've gained in life.

What do you see,
  when you look in my heart?
Do you feel, the
  warmth, beat, and strenght?

    It's all for your friendship, in the song of life

Author notes

Well this is about one of my best friends that I loved the first day we met... One of few to really understand and accept her.

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  • movedon
    March 24

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    yes i cried What do i see when I look in your eyes? Love. honesty. strength. beauty. respect.


  • vicisstus
    March 5

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    Well

    Very great poem. But that's friend love. And it's returned. I'm asking for a poem about loving someone that doesn't love you back.