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Chocolate Bar

Step right up!
Come buy me...
I'm red and gold
and oh so pretty!

I sit by the counter,
you just can't resist!
If you don't buy me,
you won't know what you've missed.

Take me home,
unwrap me now,
pop me in your mouth,
yummy...wow!

DISCLOSURE:
I'll raise your sugar level,
I'll hype you up,
I'll rot your teeth
one, by one!

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  • Scyphon
    March 8

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    A great chocolate bar write and the disclosures truth was well done. Thank you for entering the contest, best of luck. Take care and be well

  • Yummo. Thank goodness for Dentist I love Chocolate and your poem best to you in the contest be well.